Synopsis for The Forbidden Game – The Hunter (spoilers):
Jenny Thornton buys this game (without even looking at it) from a cute guy at this game store that just appeared out of nowhere while she’s running away from two guys who are following her. All of her friends gather around to play this game – Audrey (newest member of the group, fashionista, army brat – her dad just retired to this town), Dee (African goddess with a warrior attitude – fierce personality with a black belt in kung-fu), Michael (sarcastic teddy bear who’s dating Audrey), Summer (tiny girl with blonde hair and dimples), Zach (Jenny’s artsy photographer cousin), and Tom (Jenny’s jock boyfriend who she worships, though he can sometimes be snappy and doesn’t always consider her feelings first). The game begins – it is a paper doll house with paper dolls they draw to look like themselves. They swear an oath to play the game of their own free will and that the game is real. Turns out it IS real. They end up in the house. They invoked a rune (a mystical letter of the ancient alphabet that allows others to walk between worlds). Julian (the boy who sold Jenny the game) is in love with Jenny (love at first sight) and devised this game in what he calls the Shadow World – if she makes it to the top before sunrise they are free. If not, she stays with him forever. One warning though, if you get hurt or die in the dream, it happens for real…oh and one of her friends won’t make it.
Tom freaks out, saying things are crawling all over him but no one else can see it. He disappears, as do Jenny’s other friends. They are scattered throughout the house. Jenny takes off after them. First up is Dee. Her nightmare is that aliens kidnap her and perform experiments on her. Jenny and her escape and find Audrey. Her nightmare is that she is sacrificed to the male elf race. Dee and Jenny are along for the ride. Audrey overcomes her nightmare and they realize for every nightmare, the time is an hour later than it was when the nightmare began. Next, it’s on to Michael’s nightmare (Audrey, Dee, and Jenny are in it too). Michael’s nightmare has leaves and moss coming out of his skin. He’s afraid he’ll turn into a plant. They help him overcome it and next is Summer. Her nightmare is about her messy room. Her grandmother told her things would start living in it. So giant cockroaches and maggots and creepy crawly things start to come out of all the garbage and piles of stuff in her room and Summer starts to freak out. Jenny sees the exit door has appeared out of nowhere (as it does with everyone’s nightmare once they overcome it) and she tries to get everybody out. However, Summer is too freaked out. She’s frozen in place and can’t stop screaming. Dee forces Jenny out of the room before the door disappears, but they’re forced to leave Summer behind. She is the casualty of the game. They become separated and Jenny finds Zach. His nightmare is a man in hunters gear is hunting him with a bow and arrow. They run and Jenny finally tells Zach he just has to take his mask off so he can overcome the nightmare. He does, there’s no one there and the clothes crumple to the ground. They get out and find Audrey, Michael, and Dee. They split up to cover each end of the hallway. Jenny is alone. She finds a door. It’s time for her nightmare.
Jenny could never remember the nightmare when she woke up, she just knew it had something to do with being at her grandfather’s house. She’s a little girl at the top of the stairs to the basement. It’s her Grandpa Everson’s basement. Even though the door is usually locked, it wasn’t this time. As a curious little girl, she starts to explore. There are books and notes all over the basement on runes. One was Nauthiz, a backward leaning X with one stroke longer than the other. It was used for containment and drawn on the closet door. Jenny opens the door. There are millions of eyes looking back at her. Older Jenny realizes they are all Shadow Men and her grandfather is a sorcerer. She sees Julian’s blue eyes in the midst of them all too. They call to her. They want her. Jenny’s grandfather bursts in and pushes her aside. But now that they’ve seen Jenny, they want her. He tries to contain them again by shouting Nauthiz! and tracing the X but it doesn’t work this time. He offers for them to take him instead. They do. Jenny learns that Julian is a genie of sorts. After he is gone Dee, Audrey, Michael and Zach find her in her nightmare and show her the door has appeared. She hesitates and Dee and Audrey work together to get her to go. Dee and Audrey are much closer now. They all leave. Jenny tells them the story of her nightmare, Zach is surprised, he tells her everyone thought their grandpa had hurt her and felt so bad about it he ran off.
Finally, they’ve made it to the top. It’s almost dawn. Tom is there and he’s chained up. Julian has been showing him everything (except when Julian was with Jenny trying to trick and entice her to stay with him) through a magic mirror. Julian appears. He opens the door for them to go back to their world, but The Creeper (a shadow snake) and the Lurker (a shadow wolf) is blocking them in. Jenny said it’s not fair, they beat the game. Julian tells her he promised to open the door. It’s open, they just have to get around the snake and wolf. Jenny bargains with him. If he lets her friends go, she will stay with him willingly. It’s an offer he can’t refuse. He gives her a ring – in the inside it is inscribed All I refuse & thee I chuse. They swear oaths to bind them together forever and he slips the ring on her finger. Her friends refuse to leave without her. She and Julian go off to another room to be alone together. She brings him into a closet and they start to kiss. He says he is afraid of closets since her grandfather trapped him years ago. She tells him she’ll give him better memories of it. As they kiss, she manages to vault him behind her into the closet. She slams the door shut, yells “Nauthiz!” and makes the X with her finger. It works, she doesn’t hear a sound from Julian. He’s contained. Jenny runs back to her friends and they all jump through the door just as the sun is rising. They did it – they won. Well all except for Summer, who is gone. How do they explain that to her parents? The police? Although it’s been a long night, Jenny knows she is now a stronger person than she was.
Tom admits to her his nightmare was twofold – rats (which he thought was crawling all over him in the beginning of the game) and losing Jenny. He knows he’s taken her for granted and then tells her he loves her. She says it back. He notices she still has the ring on. She takes it off, throws the paper dollhouse and all the paper figures along with the ring back into the box and tapes it up, leaving it on the table. They go to the kitchen to call the police when they return the box is gone.
Part one closes from the point of view of the two men who had been following Jenny at the beginning of the book. They took the game from Jenny’s house. They followed her home and finally got the nerve to break in and get the game they couldn’t get out of their heads. They open it.
END OF PART 1. PART 2 – THE CHASE. Coming Soon.
Review of Part 1 – The Hunt:
6 out of 10. Okay I admit when I started this book I was like wtf. This is weird. Some of the nightmares were kind of stupid too (Michael’s about becoming a tree – what was that about?). Also, I read reviews for this book on amazon and everyone was like oh I love Julian! Ok I don’t see why – though I’m hoping that’ll come later on. Sure he’s sweet (to Jenny) and madly in love with her (though love at first sight that strong? Ummm sure..) but he’s evil – he let a nightmare kill one of her best friends and put them all through hell. But there was also something very compelling. It made you want to keep reading. Julian does have this suave quality about him. Although there are definitely some weird parts to this book, overall it wasn’t too bad of a read. L.J. Smith could've made the book half of what it was without all the description of everything, but I guess when you're creating a book about another world it has to be somewhat descriptive.